
The plot of this book is everything you'd expect it to be from the synopsis, although that's not a necessarily a bad thing. The plot follows Jacks, the most loved angel in the City of Angels, and Maddy, an ordinary human who seems to be the only person immune to the charm of the Angels. It switches between their point of views so the readers get aspects from both of their lives which helps us connect more with the characters. I'm not going to lie, it is pretty predictable what is going to happen throughout the narrative which makes it a little difficult to be gripped in the claws of the plot. The action scenes in the book were well written, especially the end fight scene which had me shouting angry remarks at one point.
Jacks and Maddy's dynamic was interesting. I really did like the way that Maddy stayed true to herself and didn't immediately fall for Jacks charm from the very beginning and the way Speer gradually built up their relationship. It was hard to not fall for Jacks, even though he has a very stereotypical teenage view on life; I'm misunderstood, nobody understands me. You get the picture. Jackson Godspeed is the most famous Angel and to be fair to him, a lot is demanded of him and he is also having to protect himself from an Angel serial killer so of course he is going to be feeling misunderstood. But don't get me wrong, he does have some redeeming qualities, he is handsome, interesting, charming and has a lot of heart.
The one thing that stood out the most about Immortal City was the social comment. Ignoring the romance and murder, if you were to change the names of the Angels to celebrities in our society then there would be little difference in the way the public in the book acts. Speer delivers a comment that forces us to think about how ignorant and ridiculous it is to act this way to a group of elite strangers, and really it's quite interesting. I have no idea whether he intended for the book to come across in this light, but I congratulate you sir because it was brilliant.
Overall, I would give this book 3.5 stars out of 5. It's a fun, easy read, at times it'll make you laugh and you'll be charmed by Jacks. I'm not sure whether I will read the sequel; Natural Born Angel but this book is worth a read if you have the chance.